Workshop Notes: Within the writing workshop, my peers informed me of many ways in which I could improve my essay. One constructive criticism that kept coming up was to include an example of a song or rapper in my paper and explain why I enjoy it. From this I went through many tracks to find the right lyric that I wanted to explain. I believe this addition to my paper was very helpful.
Another suggested way in which I could improve my paper was by adding more to my intro. They said it was a strong start, but I should add a little bit more.
Process Work
1. When reflecting back on my tweets I found I tweet a lot about music. I used this tweet of me talking about how I preordered the new A$AP album as the inspiration for my essay.
2. This was another tweet I used for
inspiration. “#GKMC” meaning Good Kid,
Madd City (Kendrick Lamar’s new album which was about to be released at the
time). Also note: the retweet of Aziz
Ansari.
3. This is a picture of my notes when I was brainstorming for a topic. I knew I wanted to do something with music, but I wasn't sure yet at the time.